Agony-Chapter 3
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I was wiping tears right along with Heath at the end. I mentioned it before but I must say it again. Your terse writing style is excellent for giving us brief flashes of the horrible injuries to...
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Valley girl said it all!! Now, Heath, go find Nick and help him take care of Henshaw as only Nick can!!!!!!!!!
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Such an emotional chapter, you captured the pain each was going through so well. And I agree about glimpsing the injuries, much more powerful than gory details.
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Heath really has such a tender but tough heart. I"m glad he helped Audra face and pray for Jarrod. Hopefully, this is not the last time he will see his older brother. Heath needs to catch up with Nick...
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I'm glad that Heath settled his duties, both to his family and Jarrod. Now to find Nick and help him with the duty of getting those guys who did all that damage!
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Will Heath find Nick in time to prevent him from doing something or will he help Nick?Hurry back TC !!!Laura
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ahhh--now I'm sobbing--this is really, really good--but oh, such...AGONY!!! First Jarrod's eye, now his hair...aargh! hurry back!RG
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Now I am in agony after that speech. It is so right on and perfect!!!!
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In many ways, with Audra, then Jarrod, this was a healing chapter. I can only hope that Heath can find Nick so more healing can take place...while Jarrod is fighting quietly back at home.
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Another chapter. Heath's one-sided conversation with his ailing brother was heart wrenching but perfect. I hope Jarrod did him and continues to fight until Nick and Heath return.
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I have just managed to catch up with the last two chapters and Topcat, you really are putting us and the family through it...poor Jarrod!! I was so pleased that Heath was able to help Audra overcome...
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I love the way you are characterizing the members of the Barkley family. Excellent writing.
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I really liked the conversations Heath had with Audra and then Jarrod. Hope he is able to catch up with Nick and then the both of them reach Henshaw soon. Can I join them???? I want to help take care...
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Wonderfully touching moment between Heath and the brother he loves so dearly. I only hope he can find his other brother soon and together they can bring justice -- the way Jarrod would have wanted it...
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